Hi lumana'i manuia mo a taeao. I like your poem it is filled with a lot of Samoan words and some I don't know yet. I like what you wrote and how you say sisters and brothers it is a really good poem it makes scene and that is y I like your poem.
Thank you for your comment, Fossie. We do love being in Lumana'i and learning our gagana and aganu'u Samoa. We are glad you enjoyed out class poem. We have some exciting stories coming up about the art of the Samoan tatau so keep watching this space!
Hello. I like how you added the poem in. I thought that it would take ages to write because you could only use pronouns. I enjoyed reading it because it had a lot of thought. I have never written a Bio Poem. Next time, you could do it about a different thing.
Kia Ora Room 4! My name is Lucy and i go to Wesley Intermediate school. Your school sounds really fun and you are lucky to have a pajama day at school! We never get that! Do you think you could send some photos of you guys in pajamas for pajama day?
Hi lumana'i manuia mo a taeao. I like your poem it is filled with a lot of Samoan words and some I don't know yet. I like what you wrote and how you say sisters and brothers it is a really good poem it makes scene and that is y I like your poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment, Fossie. We do love being in Lumana'i and learning our gagana and aganu'u Samoa. We are glad you enjoyed out class poem. We have some exciting stories coming up about the art of the Samoan tatau so keep watching this space!
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ReplyDeleteI like your picture of your community
From Dwight
Hello. I like how you added the poem in. I thought that it would take ages to write because you could only use pronouns. I enjoyed reading it because it had a lot of thought. I have never written a Bio Poem. Next time, you could do it about a different thing.
ReplyDeleteDear room 11, I am Lucy from YMS. I am a year 6
ReplyDeleteThis is a really cool blog post. I think it is creative. I like how it was funny and explains about your class.
To improve, I would write some more at the top.
Kind Regards
- Lucy
Kia Ora Room 4! My name is Lucy and i go to Wesley Intermediate school. Your school sounds really fun and you are lucky to have a pajama day at school! We never get that! Do you think you could send some photos of you guys in pajamas for pajama day?
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